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1)Wordsworth imagines himself as (like) a cloud which overflows (better: floats over) valleys and hills. Before (Wordsworth) nature was seen as a philosophical entity. Now it starts to be seen as a real living being.
2)He sees nature in a pantheistic way. He believes that all element of nature are affected (?) by the presence of an immanent God. The flowers are described as a crowd, alive and in movement, to show that they are like living beings.
3)In the second stanza the poet’s pantheistic view of nature appears (correction: describes nature according to a pantheistic view, gives a pantheistic view of nature?)
4)He says that the daffodils, while kindly moving their heads, outdo the waves in glee. In the poem is presented a pantheistic view of nature (a pantheistic view of nature is present?) according to which every element of nature is in harmony with the whole universe.
5)Their golden colour make them shine like a group of stars, as we can derive from the simile of the Milky way. The flowers are continuous as the stars in the Milky Way
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1) Wordsworth uses the image of a cloud floating over valleys and hills to represent his connection to nature. This contrasts with the traditional view of nature as a philosophical concept and presents it as a tangible, living entity.
To improve this sentence, you can replace "overflows" with "floats over" to better convey the image of a cloud gracefully moving over the landscape.
2) Wordsworth adopts a pantheistic perspective, which means that he sees divinity or a higher power in all elements of nature. He believes that the presence of an immanent God affects every aspect of nature.
To make this sentence clearer, you can replace "affected" with "influenced" or "touched" to highlight the connection between divinity and nature.
3) In the second stanza, the poet describes nature from a pantheistic viewpoint, emphasizing the belief that the entire natural world is interconnected and divine.
To clarify this sentence, you can rephrase it as "The second stanza presents a pantheistic perspective by describing nature according to this worldview."
4) Wordsworth describes the daffodils as moving their heads kindly and surpassing the waves in their joy. This poem exemplifies a pantheistic understanding of nature, which suggests that every aspect of the natural world is harmoniously connected to the entire universe.
To improve this sentence, you can rephrase it as "The poem presents a pantheistic view of nature in which all elements of nature are in harmony with the entire universe."
5) The golden color of the daffodils causes them to shine like a group of stars, drawing a parallel to the simile of the Milky Way. The poem suggests that the daffodils, much like the stars, are constant and never-ending.
This sentence is already well-written and conveys the intended meaning clearly. No corrections are necessary.
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