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Can you please tell me if I made any mistakes in the following sentences?
Thank you very much for your help.
Thank you for your corrections.
Can you please check the grammar in the following letter, please?

1) Do you think you can help me find a school in your area which could be interested in an e-mail correspondence with our school? It is a high school with an emphasis on science and has got about nine hundred students aged between 14 and 18 (years old).It offers an in-depth knowledge of scientific subjects such as chemistry, physics and science.
2) Our town is renowned for its confectionary industry, its red wines and its spectacular hilly (?) scenery.
Being a medieval town, it still preserves some of its towers dating back to the 12th century.
3)Our students are all motivated and would be happy (?) to get in touch with English-speaking students of their age. They would also be pleased to accomodate some of them in the future.
4)They are all looking forward to starting a partnership with your school.
5) On which day can I reach you through skype? What are you working on at the moment?

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    1) Please help me find a school in your area which might be interested in an e-mail correspondence with our school? Ours is a high school with an emphasis on science, with about nine hundred students between the ages of 14 and 18. It offers an in-depth knowledge of scientific subjects, such as chemistry, physics, and science.

    2) Our town is known for its confectionary industry, its red wines, and its spectacular, hilly scenery.
    Being a medieval town, it still has some of its towers dating back to the 12th century.

    3)Our students are all motivated and would be happy to correspond with English-speaking students of their age. They would also be pleased to host some of them in the future.

    4)They are all looking forward to starting a partnership with your school.

    5) On which day can I reach you through skype? What are you working on at the moment? <~~What's the purpose of this last question? It comes across as rather nosy!

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