Thank you very much for your help.Here are some more sentences I'm not sure of.
1) An ancient mariner stops one among three wedding guests. This is fascinated by the mariner's grey beard and above all by his glittering eye.
2)The mariner seems to appear from nowhere. The only mobile thing about him is his glittering eye, which casts the spell that binds the guest and makes him listen to his story. His beard is long and grey, his eyes are glittering and bright and his hands are skinny.
3)The wedding guest is a close relative of the bridegroom or the bride.
4)First, the mariner holds his hands which the wedding guest asks him to drop and then he holds his will.
The wedding guest, like a three-year-old child, is forced to listen to the Mariner's tale. "He cannot choose but hear". (He cannot refuse to listen to his story).
5)The mariner tells him how his ship was cheered and left the harbor. It sailed southward in good weather and reached the Equator.
6)The weather grew terribly cold. The land of ice was dominated by fearful sounds where no living creature was to be seen. In particular, the ice is presented as a dangerous creature which made deep, very loud noises. The floating blocks of ice are also said to send a mysterious sheen.
7)The albatross ate food it had never eaten before and flew round the ship . The ice split as the sound of thunder and the helmsman steered them through.
A good South wind sprung up (synonym?) behind the ship.
8)The albatross followed them for nine nights while the white Moon glimmered through a white smokey fog.
1. "This is fascinated" is not quite clear enough but "This guest is..." is!
4. "Holds his will?" At first thought I thought it referred to the will a dying patient might write!
7. synonyms for "sprung up" = arose, developed, emerged, swelled
Sra
1) The sentence describes an ancient mariner who captures the attention of one of the three wedding guests. The guest is particularly fascinated by the mariner's grey beard and, most of all, by his glittering eye.
2) In this sentence, it is portrayed that the mariner appears suddenly, seemingly out of nowhere. The only part of him that seems to move is his glittering eye, which holds a spell over the guest, compelling him to listen to the mariner's story. The mariner is depicted as having a long and grey beard, bright and glittering eyes, and bony hands.
3) This sentence indicates that the wedding guest is either a close relative of the bridegroom or the bride.
4) Initially, the mariner forcefully catches hold of the guest's hands, despite the guest's request to let go. Subsequently, the mariner captivates the guest's attention, making him listen to his story. The comparison is drawn between the guest and a three-year-old child who is compelled to do something, so the wedding guest is compelled to listen to the mariner's tale.
5) The mariner narrates how his ship was bid farewell as it left the harbor. It sailed towards the south in good weather conditions and eventually reached the Equator.
6) The sentence describes the weather turning extremely cold. The land of ice is characterized by alarming sounds and the absence of any living creature. The ice itself is portrayed as a menacing creature that emits loud, deep noises, and the floating ice blocks reflect a mysterious glow.
7) The albatross consumes unfamiliar food and flies around the ship. The ice splits apart with a sound resembling thunder, and the helmsman skillfully navigates the ship through the divided ice. A favorable South wind emerges behind the ship.
8) For nine consecutive nights, the albatross follows the ship as the white Moon shines through a white, smoky fog. Furthermore, a synonym for "sprung up" in this context could be "emerged" or "arose."