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Eating two cups of ice-cream every night is my habit because it has sweet and delicious taste, which always makes me feel hyper and pleased and recalls my happy moments in the past, such as party at the beach and my 18th birthday party.

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    Technically, it's correct, but it's too long. Divide it into two or three sentences.

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