Use at least five adverbs and five adjectives to write a brief review of a movie, sporting event, musical performance, or television show.
• Bold each adverb.
• Underline each adjective.
• Compare the event to one or more similar events. When comparing, use at least three comparatives and three superlatives.
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I recently went to a NIckelback, Three Days Grace, and Buckcherry Concert. I was very excited once we arrived at the arena where the concert was taking place. It was very cold waiting outside but once we got inside it was hot. The arena started to fill up fast. Everyone around was very talkative about the three bands that were going to be playing. When Nickelback took stage all you could hear was people screaming. There were loud shots and fire coming up next to them. I was carelessly dancing to the music. He played mostly all the songs that I knew. My friend and I decided to leave a few minutes early so we did not get stuck in traffic.
Of the three bands that were playing Nickelback had the brightest (SUPER) lighting. Buckcherry had a lot more cleaner (COMP) music then the other two. Nickelback was the funniest (super) of the bands. It seemed like the other two bands put on a simpler (comp) show then Nickelback. Buckcherry seemed to have the smallest (super) crowed, while Nickelback had the larger (comp) crowed.
ADVERBS recently, fast, carelessly, mostly, early
Adjectives excited, cold, hot, talkative, three, screaming, loud
Others:
Adverb : very
I would change "fast" to "quickly." (Adverb again). "Fast" used as an adverb almost sounds too much like slang to me.
All you could hear WERE people screaming.
I am doing this on my blackberry and distracted by my TV and other work, so I may have missed quite a few.
Thanks besides that does the second half look alright with the super and comp
Yes. Except: more cleaner should just say cleaner. (No "more.")
Crowed - crowd.
I recently went to a Nickelback, Three Days Grace, and Buckcherry concert and it was an extremely exciting event. Upon arriving at the arena, I couldn't contain my anticipation. Unfortunately, it was very cold waiting outside, but once we got inside, the atmosphere turned incredibly hot. The arena quickly filled up and everyone around was highly talkative, discussing the three bands that were about to perform.
When Nickelback took the stage, the crowd erupted in deafening screams. The concert featured loud shots and fire effects, making the whole experience even more thrilling. I found myself carelessly dancing to the music, fully immersed in the performance. Nickelback played mostly all the songs that I knew, which added to my enjoyment. However, my friend and I decided to leave a few minutes early to avoid getting stuck in traffic.
Comparing the three bands, Nickelback had the brightest lighting, creating a superlative visual spectacle. Buckcherry had cleaner music than the other two bands, with a more polished sound. In terms of humor, Nickelback was the funniest, bringing an entertaining element to the concert. The performances by the other two bands seemed simpler in comparison to Nickelback's more elaborate show. Additionally, Buckcherry had the smallest crowd, while Nickelback drew the largest audience.
In summary, I had a recently thrilling experience at the Nickelback, Three Days Grace, and Buckcherry concert. The event was filled with excitement and the bands each brought their own unique qualities to the stage. Despite the cold weather outside, the atmosphere inside the arena was hot and filled with talkative fans. Nickelback's performance, with its bright lighting and humorous moments, stood out among the three bands. Leaving a few minutes early allowed us to avoid traffic and end the night on a high note.
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