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I forgot to include the following statements. I really hope you can have a look at them, too.
1)I have football training twice a week. It lasts two hours and is very wearisome.
2)I like playing football very much (and not: I like very uch playing..)
3)I have a lot of friends im my town and I hope to have as many (?) in London.
4) I like reading science fiction films and watching films on my computer. I also use the computer to search information and communicate with others.
5) My sister goes to Turin university (and not: to the university of Turin).
6) I like listening to old (?) bands such as the Queens, the Beatles and so on
7)My favourite film is "....", starring (?) Johnny Depp.
8) Lessons finish at 13.00. My bus back home is at 13.30.

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    1. I have football practice twice a week. It lasts two hours and is very tiring.

    2. I really like playing football.

    3. I have a lot of friends in my town, and I hope to have as many in London.

    4) I like reading science fiction books and watching scifi films on my computer. I also use the computer to search information and communicate with others.

    5. My sister goes to the University of Turin.

    6) I like listening to old bands, such as Queen, the Beatles, and so on.

    7)My favourite film is Pirates of the Caribbean, starring Johnny Depp.

    8) Lessons finish at 13.00. My bus back home leaves school at 13.30.

    Read and compare carefully -- for spelling, for punctuation, etc. Some seem tiny and could be read over too easily.

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