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Jamal was all doing this to keep his heart safe. It was unique way to protect himself from the wounds of love and dishonesty. But I believe there is no substitute of true love and better understanding. The force of love is the energy that flows through you, same it does with the Jamal. At the end, he start having faith and trust in the woman.
This story suggests that intelligence can change the perspectives of life. In world literature, we came to know how every story ends by the power of sword, but it break the tradition and shows human‘s intelligence can also solve the problems.

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a unique way
for true love (not of)
he started having
power of the sword
but it breaks tradition