Can you please tell me if everything is correct? Thank you very much for your invaluable help.
1) Mickey can’t go to the cinema because he hasn’t got any money (he's broke?). He doesn’t want to borrow any money from Jess because he can’t pay her back.
2) His father can’t give him any money, too because he lost his job yesterday.
3)He’s going to leave drama school though he loves acting. London is very expensive and he can’t afford to pay the rent to Mrs Adams. He’s going to go home to Manchester.
4) Storm thinks that he is a great actor and that he will be very unhappy if he gives up acting now. She believes he should audition for a part in the soap opera The best Days.
5) Mickey works as a dishwasher. He walks to work and therefore he is always tired.
6) The Audition starts at 10 a.m. on Saturday 2nd May. It is at Bankside Studios. Mickey must bring a letter of permission from his school, two photos, and music to sing as they will ask him to sing and read a part.
7) He should wear casual clothes. If he gets there by tube, the nearest stations are Waterloo, Southwark or London Bridge.
8) Alec really loves acting but he hasn’t been on a film shoot yet. His parents are happy about him working for TV./ with his decision of working for TV (?). He is a bit nervous because he has never done an audition before.
2. Instead of "too" I'd use "either"
4. Who is "She?"
8. about his working (not him) because "working" here is a gerund, functioning as a noun so it requires a possessive adjective.
Sra
Based on the information provided, here are my observations:
1) The statement is correct. Mickey can't go to the cinema because he doesn't have any money and he doesn't want to borrow money from Jess.
2) The statement is correct. Mickey's father also can't give him any money because he lost his job.
3) The statement is correct. Mickey is planning to leave drama school because he can't afford the rent in London and will go back home to Manchester.
4) The statement is correct. Storm believes that Mickey should audition for a part in the soap opera "The Best Days" because she thinks he is a great actor.
5) The statement is correct. Mickey works as a dishwasher and he walks to work, which makes him tired.
6) The statement is correct. The audition is scheduled for 10 a.m. on Saturday, May 2nd at Bankside Studios. Mickey needs to bring a letter of permission from his school, two photos, and music for singing and reading.
7) The statement is correct. If Mickey chooses to go by tube, the nearest stations to Bankside Studios are Waterloo, Southwark, or London Bridge.
8) The statement is correct. Alec loves acting, but he has never been on a film shoot before. His parents support his decision to work for TV, but he is a little nervous because he has never done an audition.
Please note that my analysis is based solely on the information provided.