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I need the following sentence to be one sentence. Does this sentence flow okay and is punctuation correct? Is there a better way to word the following sentence? I am applying for the position of office manager of surgical services at Barnes Hospital that appeared in the Nursing News last Wednesday since broading by education in medical billing and coding; in addition, this job opportunity will allow me to demonstrate my confidence as a result of my last office manager position in a doctor's office.

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    This part does not make sense to me:
    since broading by education in medical billing and coding

    Perhaps instead of "confidence" you might like "proficiency?"

    Do y ou think "office manager of surgical services" should be capitalized?

    Try it all again? Simplify and just state clearly what you wish to say.

    Sra

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