please can some read this for me .
Beowulf is very interesting and deep poem. Beowulf encompasses all aspects of a great tale. The tale is violent one, set in times when scraping together an existence and keeping your own within rigid martial and political hierarchies. It has a lot of action in it. It shows how a real hero will try to win a battle to help the person in need. There is something about the raw power, the direct yet engaging storyline, the rhythm and tone of the story that bring me into another world. There is a lot of philosophy in this poem which shows us that world is a brutal and honorable place to live, where heroism and death go side by side, where every act has its consequences to be happen and there is no expectation of joy and happiness from anyone.
You have first person ("me"), second person ("your"), and third person (all the nouns) mixed up in here. First thing you need to do is to straighten it all out -- make it all third person; get rid of all first and second person references and rephrase those sentences.
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On April 12, 1961, Yuri Gagarin became the first person to orbit Earth.
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"Beowulf is very interesting and deep poem. Beowulf encompasses all aspects of a great tale. The tale is violent one, set in times when scraping together an existence and keeping your own within rigid martial and political hierarchies. It has a lot of action in it. It shows how a real hero will try to win a battle to help the person in need. There is something about the raw power, the direct yet engaging storyline, the rhythm and tone of the story that bring me into another world. There is a lot of philosophy in this poem which shows us that world is a brutal and honorable place to live, where heroism and death go side by side, where every act has its consequences to be happen and there is no expectation of joy and happiness from anyone."
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