Can someone please check the errors I have noted and let me know if they see more? I am supposed to find 20 errors but can only find 15!! Please help. The correction is in parentheses.
Why are great numbers of students choosing to pursue their college degrees using their home computers. (computers?) Benjamin Franklin said; (said) A (“A)penny saved is a penny earned”. This principle applies to the American (American) and foreign online student. Todays (Today’s) students choose to take online courses to save money on transportation, books, babysitters (babysitters,) and supplies.
The fluctuating cost of gasoline in the united states (United States) is one reason online courses appeal to axia (Axia) college students. They would rather cushion there (their) financial nest eggs than to spend money on replacing worn tires or risking icy road conditions.
Students also realize that a traditional college requires them to purchase numerous books however, (,however,) online courses provide the majority of their course materials within the virtual classroom. A student may save hundreds of dollars on textbooks during one block of courses.
Additionally (Additionally,) online courses are convenient for parents and caregivers. College students who are responsible for children or aging parents must rely on outside help. An online student is able to avoid the high costs of hiring people to take care of their loved ones.
Lastly, an online student does not have to purchase supplies. Pencils, pens, paper, erasers, backpacks (backpacks,) staplers, and paper clips are all needed in traditional courses. The online student needs only one tool to complete their college degree; a home computer. A computer is an online students (student’s) conduit to class and to all the materials he or she needs.
Franklin D. roosevelt (Roosevelt) exclaimed that, (that) “Happiness is not the mere possession of money.” He wanted Americans to understand that the joy of achievement is the path to happiness. Yet, even President Roosevelt would agree that earning an online college degree is a financially wise decision.
Additional mistakes:
(“A)penny saved is a penny earned”. (earned."
and (the) foreign online student.
appeal to axia (Axia) college (College) students
The online student needs only one tool to complete their (his or her) college degree; (degree:) a home computer.
Also -- corrections for your corrections --
Benjamin Franklin said; (said,)
books however, (,however,) (books; however,)
Thank you soooo much for the help!! (0:
To find the errors in the given text, you can follow these steps:
1. Read through the text carefully.
2. Look for any spelling or grammatical errors.
3. Pay attention to punctuation and capitalization mistakes.
4. Compare the text with the original sentence to identify any missing or extra words.
5. Consider the context and meaning of the sentence to spot any inconsistencies or inaccuracies.
Here are the corrections for the errors you have listed:
1. "computers" instead of "computers?" in the first sentence.
2. "said" instead of "said;" in the second sentence.
3. "A penny saved is a penny earned" instead of "A penny saved is a penny earned"." (Remove the extra period and quotation mark).
4. "American" instead of "American." in the third sentence.
5. "Today's" instead of "Todays" in the fourth sentence.
6. "babysitters" instead of "babysitters," in the fourth sentence.
7. "United States" instead of "united states" in the fifth sentence.
8. "Axia" instead of "axia" in the fifth sentence.
9. "their" instead of "there" in the sixth sentence.
10. ", however," instead of ",however," in the seventh sentence.
11. "Additionally," instead of "Additionally" in the eighth sentence.
12. "online student's" instead of "online students" in the last sentence.
13. "Roosevelt" instead of "roosevelt" in the tenth sentence.
14. "that" instead of "that," in the eleventh sentence.
With these corrections, you now have a total of 18 errors instead of 15. If you are still missing two errors, go through the text again and carefully review each sentence to identify any additional mistakes.