Can you help me check these sentences, please? Thank you very much in advance.

1) The new factor in the Canterbury Tales is that there is individualization (?) . THe character exists because he has reactions and is in movement.
2) His individualization (?) is therefore dynamic in antithesis with the conventional medieval character portrait which was rather static.
3) Chaucer mixes male and female characters to underline the importance women were achieving (acquiring, earning is the past continuous correct?) within the middle class.
4) He describes a society in which work conditioned the personality and the individual' view ofthe world.
5) Neither the aristocracy nor the lower classes are present (are included) in Chaucer's portrait of English society.
6) The pilgrims tell us something about themselves and their life style.
7) Each pilgrim is supposed to tell two tales on his way to Canterbury and two on his way back from Canterbury.
8) A prize will be awarded (given?) to the best story and a penalty to anyone who will give up.
9) Can you say "the best story will be awarded ?
10) The pilgrimage represents the route (way?) to the holy celestial city of Jerusalem.
11) The decription of the pilgrims is different in length (or differs, varies in length?)
12) There will be a penalty for those/anyone who give up (BUT NOT fo whom gives up?
13) Among the main themes covered in the tales are those of marriage, love and hypocrisy (can you just say "are" marriage....?)

3. Most of these are being answered in the present tense, except this one begins with the present (mixes) and switches to the past?

5. Neither is singular = is

99. yes

11. decription = descrption (typo)

12. anyone (singular) who gives but and then fo = for or to?

13. yes

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1) The new aspect introduced in the Canterbury Tales is the individualization of characters. In this case, individualization means that each character has unique reactions and is depicted as actively participating in the story.

To check the sentence, you can try rearranging the words and adding necessary punctuation: "In the Canterbury Tales, there is individualization as each character exists due to their reactions and movement." This revised sentence provides a clearer structure and improved readability.

2) His individualization, in contrast to the traditional medieval character portrait which was often static, is dynamic.

To check the sentence, you can rephrase it slightly: "In contrast to the conventional medieval character portrait that was static, his individualization is dynamic." This version maintains the intended meaning while improving the flow of the sentence.

3) Chaucer includes both male and female characters in order to highlight the increasing importance women were acquiring within the middle class.

To check the sentence, you can make a small correction: "Chaucer includes both male and female characters to underline the increasing importance women were acquiring within the middle class." This revised version clarifies the meaning and improves the sentence structure.

4) He portrays a society where work shapes individuals' personalities and their views of the world.

To check the sentence, you can revise it slightly: "He portrays a society in which work conditions the personalities and worldviews of individuals." This version maintains the original meaning but enhances the sentence structure.

5) Chaucer's portrayal of English society includes neither the aristocracy nor the lower classes.

To check the sentence, you can rephrase it to: "Chaucer's portrayal of English society does not include either the aristocracy or the lower classes." This version provides a clearer statement regarding the absence of these social classes.

6) The pilgrims reveal information about themselves and their lifestyles.

To check the sentence, you can rearrange it slightly: "The pilgrims tell us about themselves and their lifestyles." This revised version maintains the original meaning but improves sentence structure.

7) Each pilgrim is expected to tell two tales on the way to Canterbury and two on the way back.

To check the sentence, you can rephrase it slightly: "Each pilgrim is supposed to tell two tales during their journey to Canterbury and two on the return journey." This version clarifies the sequence of events and improves readability.

8) A prize will be awarded to the best story, and there will be a penalty for anyone who gives up.

To check the sentence, you can make a small adjustment: "A prize will be awarded to the best story, while a penalty will be given to those who give up." This revised version maintains the original meaning but provides better sentence structure.

9) Can you say "the best story will be awarded"?

The sentence is correct as it is. There is no need for further modifications.

10) The pilgrimage represents the path to the holy celestial city of Jerusalem.

To check the sentence, you can make a slight adjustment: "The pilgrimage represents the journey to the holy celestial city of Jerusalem." This revised version maintains the original meaning while improving sentence structure.

11) The description of the pilgrims varies in length.

To check the sentence, you can rephrase it slightly: "The descriptions of the pilgrims differ in length." This version provides a clearer statement about the variation in description length.

12) There will be a penalty for those who give up.

To check the sentence, you can revise it slightly: "There will be a penalty for anyone who gives up." This version maintains the original meaning but improves sentence structure.

13) Among the main themes covered in the tales, marriage, love, and hypocrisy are included.

To check the sentence, you can modify it slightly: "Among the main themes covered in the tales are marriage, love, and hypocrisy." This revised version maintains the original meaning while providing better sentence structure.