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This is one sentence which I am having a bit difficulties on. It contains too much wordiness from my outlook.

Proper sitting and standing are very crucial factors in having a healthy back.

Does this make better sense?

Sitting and standing properly are cruical factors in helping you maintain a healthy back.

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    why don't you say:

    sitting and standing properly are crucial factors to maintaining a healthy back.

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    thanks Maggie, that does sound better
    :-)

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