Writeacher, I tried to change some sentences, and tried to add conjunctions in some, but I don't know if they seem to make sense.

what are the conjunctions u have ill check

Don't worry, I'm here to help you! To determine if your sentences make sense and if the conjunctions you added are appropriate, I'll need to see the sentences you've revised. Please go ahead and provide the sentences, and I'll assist you in evaluating them.