posted by Sara .
Happiness: What is happiness?
This is what a poet says:
Happiness is a butterfly
which when pursues is just beyond
but if you will sit down quietly,
may light upon you.
This is what I say:
Happiness is the crisp autumn breeze
Which when ignored blows harder and harder....
but if you hold your arms out wide may embrace you with love.
What do you say:
May I please know if my poem sounds good, and I'll appreciate it if you could also create one for me to hear and comment. Thank you very much:-)
Or you could omit "with love."