Please correct the sentence below, adding punctuation and changing words as needed. The snow was falling fast and was so pretty to behold but we dreaded having to shovel and salt the walkways.
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The snow was falling fast and was so pretty to behold, but we dreaded having to shovel and salt the walkways.
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The snow was falling fast, and it was so pretty to behold. However, we dreaded having to shovel and salt the walkways.
To correct this sentence, there are a few changes that need to be made. First, a comma is added after "fast" to separate the two related but independent clauses. Second, the word "but" is inserted to show the contrast between the beauty of the snow and the dread of shoveling and salting. Lastly, a period is used to end the sentence.