What would be a good thesis statement on steroids ?
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What do you want to say about steroids?
Steroids are life-savers for many people with serious illnesses. Steroids are also abused by a few athletes.
Well I do not want to be bias because of exactly what you said on how it can cure serious illnesses and I'm trying to say that more information is needed before banning steroids because this decision can make or break someones life...
How would I sum it up ?
Are you opposed to illegal or unauthorized use of steroids?
Read through several of these sites may help you clarify your ideas.
http://www.google.com/search?source=ig&hl=en&rlz=1G1GGLQ_ENUS374&q=steroid+use
I am opposed to it unless it will be aiding in helping someone in a critical situation .
How do this sound ?
Steroids are life-savers for many people with serious illnesses and banning them can ruin one who is dependent upon it.
The only plans to ban steroids is for people who are involved in competitive sports. I don't think anyone has proposed banning steroid use for everyone.
Please read those websites I posted.