Thank you very much for your last corrections. Can you pleasecheck these sentences , too?
1) She thinks of the books which have been given to her and inscribed by the poets themselves.
2) Though the furniture of their winter house (or second-holiday home?) drips with moisture, she is not going to buy any (?) new one. In fact the house is occupied by only an old caretaker during the winter.
3) It consists of 32 letters, most of which are written by Pamela herself and a few by her parents.
4) They are followed by a journal, which Pamela wrote when she was secluded by her frieds at her seducer's house.
5) Richardson places himself (synonym?) in the role of the editor, publishing without comment the letters as well as the journal.
6) The novel deals with the story of a fifteen-year-old serving maid whose virtue had been unsuccessfully attacked by an unscrupolous man. She obtains, as a reward, a proposal of marriage which she accepts.
7) He, in his turn, gradually changes his behaviour towards her and changes from a seducer into a faithful husband.
8) The action is made up by (or of) scenes with no general summaries. The characters introduce one another through (or by) letters.
9) Richardson was apprenticed to a printer (or he worked as an apprentice at a printer's?). He did so well in the job that he was able to set up his own printing shop.
10) At the age of fifty he was asked to write a volume of model letters to be used by uneducated (?) readers on various occasions.
11) While writing it, it had the idea of using the epistolary technique to write about a serving maid.
2. Delete all in parentheses. Also "not going to buy anything new" or "not going to buy any new furniture."
4. "secluded from her friends" (watch spelling)
8. "of scenes" and "through letters"
Delete everything else in parentheses.