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is this not a thesis statement ?

Various approaches to prevent steroids in sports have not been successful because athletes are now using hard-to-detect growth hormones to enhance performance.

I mean I don't see how this isnt a argument

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    Can you see that it is merely a statement of fact? For an argument you need to "pick a fight." Now if you said "Clear X should NOT be the case......" someone will debate the other side = "Wrong, it SHOULD because......"

    Sra

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    But I thought thesis statements cannot have "should"

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    you need to change your approach. For instance, Steroid use by athletes should not be grounds for denying competitive opportunities. Then you can use various arguments to support that.

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    Meaning .. ?

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    What is it exactly that you don't understand.

    These two sites will explain what a thesis statement should do and how it is constructed.

    http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/thesis.html

    http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/545/01/

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