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I have to write an eight-sentence paragraph that fully develops this topic.
A high school diploma is important to my future......
but i keep going in circles and i can't get my ideas together .I keep wondering off the topic. Can anyone help me write this down.
my main points are its the first step to a higher level of education. I need it for college admissions (gate way to college.)which will then lead me to a sucessful career in medical field.
Personally, I don't think the HS diploma is all that important: what is important is the education it represents. Why is that important? It doesn't get you into college, it prepares you for it.
Education allows you to articulate your thoughts, analyze, and develope trains of thought that are developed. In short, education is the gate-way for critical reading, thinking, and creating.
If one focuses on the diploma, diploma mills look awfully attractive, and there are plenty of them around. So I am of the mind that your topic is off based, it is not the diploma which is important, but something deeper, more substantial, something that many don't have nor know they are missing it.
I hope this helps you.