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did i punctuate this sentence correctly?

"They wanted to have the woman give birth to healthy babies, but they wanted to get as much work out of the woman as possible; therefore, the women were given lighter tasks."

  • language arts -

    It's too long.

    You could make it two sentences, or you could reword it.

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