Can you please tell me if the following corrections are all right and help me improve them? Thank you very much in advance.

1)During Walpole's government England was fortified in economy and in the relationships between other countries.
Correction: ... economy could flourish (can you say "was fortified, was stimulated, grew stronger") and relationships with other countries improved since he managed to keep England out of foreign conflicts.
2) Society was divided into (was composed, made up of) three main classes. We can distinguish three main social classes within 18th -century English society (?)
3) At the top there was the aristocracy. Immediately below (it) there were the wealthy commercial classes, which controlled the mines and the trades.
4)The artisans and the craftsmen filled the ga between the rich and the poor (can you suggest to me a better expression that "fill the gap"?)
5)There are two types of magic in the play, maleficent and beneficent. (can you replace them with "evil" and "good"?)
6) The author's point of view is the same as the hero's (?)

1. with a comma after "government" it will read better

2. OK with any of those choices
3. OK
4. ga is probably "gap"/ in this sense, I cannot think of a synonym for to "fill, fill up"
5. Yes
6. outlook, "slant" or attitude, observation

Sra

1) During Walpole's government, the English economy experienced growth and the relationships with other countries improved. Instead of saying "was fortified," you can use phrases like "flourished," "was stimulated," or "grew stronger." For better clarification, you can add that England remained out of foreign conflicts under his leadership.

2) English society in the 18th century consisted of three main classes. Another way to express this is by saying "Society was composed" or "made up of" three main classes. Additionally, you could mention that within 18th-century English society, three main social classes can be distinguished.

3) At the top of the social hierarchy was the aristocracy. Just below them were the wealthy commercial classes, who controlled the mines and trades. You can add the pronoun "it" after "below" for clarification if needed.

4) The artisans and craftsmen bridged the gap between the rich and the poor. Instead of "filled the gap," other expressions you could use are "bridged the divide," "served as a link," or "connected."

5) The play features two types of magic: maleficent (evil) and beneficent (good). You can indeed replace them with "evil" and "good" if you prefer more straightforward descriptions.

6) The author's point of view aligns with that of the hero. Instead of saying "the same," you can use phrases like "is in line with," "mirrors," or "reflects" the hero's point of view.