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Ms. Sue, I have to ask for your opinion on this. Which introduction sounds better.

I awakened from my dream, and found myself to be sweating.

I awakened from my dream sweating.

I awoke from my dream with sweaty skin.

I awoke from my dream with a thudding heart and sweat covering me from head to toe~ Or: I awoke from my dream with a thudding heart and completely sweaty skin.

Have you ever caught a flu during your dream? Where you just wake up in sweat and your stomach is in great pain?

  • To Ms. Sue -

    I like this one best:

    I awoke from my dream with a thudding heart and sweat covering me from head to toe. It oozed out of pores I didn't know I had.

  • To Ms. Sue -

    Thank You Ms. Sue:-)

  • To Ms. Sue -

    i awoke from my dream with a thudding heart and sweat covering me from head to toe

  • To Ms. Sue -

    Ms. Sue the title I have is as you know, :Sick all over. Which title do you prefer more. Sick all over or Under the weather. your ideas would be appreciated, as well, thanks

  • To Ms. Sue -

    Sick all over is much better.

  • To Ms. Sue -

    thanks:-)

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