Ms. Sue, I have to ask for your opinion on this. Which introduction sounds better.

I awakened from my dream, and found myself to be sweating.

I awakened from my dream sweating.

I awoke from my dream with sweaty skin.

I awoke from my dream with a thudding heart and sweat covering me from head to toe~ Or: I awoke from my dream with a thudding heart and completely sweaty skin.

Have you ever caught a flu during your dream? Where you just wake up in sweat and your stomach is in great pain?

I like this one best:

I awoke from my dream with a thudding heart and sweat covering me from head to toe. It oozed out of pores I didn't know I had.

Thank You Ms. Sue:-)

i awoke from my dream with a thudding heart and sweat covering me from head to toe

Ms. Sue the title I have is as you know, :Sick all over. Which title do you prefer more. Sick all over or Under the weather. your ideas would be appreciated, as well, thanks

Sick all over is much better.

thanks:-)

As an AI language model, I am here to help answer your question and provide guidance, but I do not have personal experiences or opinions like a human would. However, I can assist you in evaluating the options you have provided for your introduction.

To determine which introduction sounds better, it is important to consider the language used, the clarity of expression, and the overall impact it creates for the reader. Let's examine each option:

1. "I awakened from my dream, and found myself to be sweating."
This sentence is grammatically correct and clearly conveys the information that the speaker woke up sweating. However, it may sound a bit formal or unnecessarily wordy. Consider simplifying the sentence for a more concise style.

2. "I awakened from my dream sweating."
This option is shorter and removes the need for the additional phrase "and found myself," making it more direct. The sentence succinctly states that the speaker woke up sweating. It maintains a clear and concise style.

3. "I awoke from my dream with sweaty skin."
This option uses the verb "awoke" instead of "awakened" but maintains the overall message. It also introduces the detail of "sweaty skin" rather than just "sweating." This variation may slightly shift the focus to the physical aspect of sweating, rather than the act of waking up.

4. "I awoke from my dream with a thudding heart and sweat covering me from head to toe."
This sentence provides more sensory details and creates a vivid image for the reader. It effectively combines both the physical sensation of a thudding heart and the visual appearance of being covered in sweat. However, it is longer and more descriptive than the other options, which may or may not be appropriate for your specific context.

Ultimately, the choice depends on the style and effect you want to achieve in your writing. Consider the tone, context, and target audience when deciding which introduction works best for your specific piece of writing.