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can someone check my french essay on pocket money and improve where possible very much appreciated

Je recois dix livres d'argent de poche par semaine de mes parents.
Pour gagner mon argent de poche je dois aider mes parents a la maison et je dirais que j'aide un peu a la maison. Par example je passe l'aspirateur at je range ma chambre -ma chambre est souvent en desorde et elle est tres encombree- parfois je lave la voiture de mon pere et il me donne un peu d'argent de poche. Je deteste faire le menage.
Mes parents m'achetent des vetements et des afffaires pour le college et moi j'achete des bonbons et des jeux video. Le weekend dernier j'ai achete des CD et des jeux video. En plus j'economise mon argent pour m'acheter une carte d'abonnement pour Rangers Football Club et des billets de concert.
Je trouve que je n'ai pas assez d'argent de poche parce que des jeux video coutent cher et je suis toujours fauche!

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    desordre = désordre
    tres = très
    encombree = emcombrée
    pere = père
    deteste = déteste
    menage = ménage
    m'achetent = m'achètent
    vetements = vêtements
    afffaires = affaires (just 2, not 3 "f's")
    college = collège (you know that means high school, right?)
    j'achete = j'achète
    video = vidéo (2 places)
    coutent = coûtent
    fauche = fauché

    You MUST learn how to make accent marks with the computer. If you tell me if you have a MAC (easy) or a PC (much more difficult) with Windows or not, I can send you the chart.

    Especially the letter "e" as there are 3 distinct sounds: e = uh / é = a(first letter of English alphabet) / è = eh
    Just consider the word élève for it has all 3 "e's."

    Please don't ask me to ever proofread anything again without accent marks!

    Sra (aka Mme)

    video = vidéo
    j'ai achete = j 'ai acheté

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    i have a pc with windows is the rest it of it ok though

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