During the early adolescence (ages 12-14) the teens are very moody. As puberty is in full swing they will experience rapid body changes. The teens are sensitive to their body as it changes. Girls tend to be less fulfilled about their body image. Most want to lose weight. A show begins to show concerns for and awareness of their body. This includes shyness, blushing, feelings of modesty and need for privacy. Also during this stage the teens are curious about sexual matters. Early adolescences would rather spend their time with friends than family. They will also need a hero or an adult to look up to today.
This looks good, Scooby.
However -- I think you have a wrong word in this sentence:
A show begins to show concerns for and awareness of their body.
is it suppose to be an*
What does this mean?
"A show begins to show . . ."
During the early adolescence (ages 12-14) the teens are very moody. As puberty is in full swing they will experience rapid body changes. The teens are sensitive to their body as it changes. Girls tend to be less fulfilled about their body image. Most want to lose weight. A show begins to show concerns for an awareness of their body. This includes shyness, blushing, feelings of modesty and need for privacy. Also during this stage the teens are curious about sexual matters. Early adolescences would rather spend their time with friends than family. They will also need a hero or an adult to look up to today. These young adolescents may disagree with their parents. The adolescents want to take the opposite view on it to test the parent’s values. The adolescents will also be rude to their parents and throw away any jobbies that they liked in their childhood. The teens might experience in some risky behaviors such as drugs, sex, or smoking. The teens will also feel like nothing bad could happen to them. It is important to the young adolescent to fit in and not appear different from his/her peers. What the teens wear for clothes, hair styles also becomes very important.
i put this will begin* does that sound better?
Yes, this is much better. :-)
A couple of minor corrections:
Early adolescents would rather spend . . .
"Jobbies" is not acceptable. It's either slang or has a different meaning that what you intend.
Change "jobbies" in this sentence:
"and throw away any jobbies that they liked in their childhood."
thank you just typed to fast i guess lol
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You're welcome.
During early adolescence (ages 12-14), teenagers go through a period of intense physical and emotional changes as a result of puberty. These changes can have a significant impact on their mood and behavior. This stage is characterized by heightened self-awareness and sensitivity towards their changing bodies.
Many girls, in particular, may feel dissatisfied with their body image during this time and may desire to lose weight. It's important to note that this can be influenced by societal factors and the pressure to conform to certain standards of beauty. It is crucial for parents, teachers, and mentors to provide support and promote body positivity and self-acceptance.
During this stage, teenagers may also become more conscious of their privacy and modesty. They might exhibit shyness, blushing, and a desire for personal space. This is a natural response to their growing awareness of their bodies and the increasing importance of social interactions among peers.
Another significant aspect of early adolescence is the curiosity about sexual matters. Teenagers may start to explore and seek information about sexuality, relationships, and reproductive health. It is essential for adults to provide accurate and age-appropriate information to help them navigate these topics safely and responsibly.
Friendship and peer relationships become increasingly important during early adolescence. Teenagers start to spend more time with their friends and seek social connections outside of their family. This is a normal part of their development as they begin to establish their own identity and gain independence.
Additionally, during this stage, teenagers might look for heroes or adult role models to look up to. This is a period of identity formation, and having a positive influence can be beneficial for their personal growth and development. Adults who provide guidance, support, and act as role models can have a significant impact on teenagers during this critical phase of their lives.