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Eddie told Alex and his dad that Lao Xu is just doing his job about reporting back to his superiors on all our activities. Alex felt bad because he liked Lao Xu who was becoming his friend but he is just an informer. His father told him try to attached him a lot. Next day he was bore and he wants to go home because he can't watch T.V and can not talk with somebody and his dad so busy. He heard his dad ,Eddie and Lao Xu in the office.

  • ela -

    Eddie told Alex and his dad that Lao Xu was just doing his job by reporting all of their activities back to his superiors. Alex felt bad because he liked Lao Xu, who was becoming his friend, but he was just an informer.
    His father told him try to attached him a lot. (I don't understand what this sentence means.)
    The next day, he (Who is he? Replace it with a name.) was bored and wanted to go home because he couldn't watch T.V, couldn't talk to anybody, and his dad too busy. He heard his dad, Eddie, and Lao Xu in the office.

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    Eddie told Alex and his dad that Lao Xu was just doing his job about reporting back to his superiors on all our activities. Alex felt bad because he liked Lao Xu who was becoming his friend, but he is just an informer. His father told him try to attached him a lot. Next day he was bored and he wanted to go home because he couldn't watch T.V or talk with somebody. His dad was very busy. He heard his dad ,Eddie and Lao Xu in the office.

  • ela -

    What does the underlined word mean?

  • ela -

    In the second to last sentence, it should say:
    couldn't talk to anybody, and his dad WAS too busy.

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