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i wrote more so can you proof read this too. please and thanyou

There was one of the top news correspondents, Eddie Nowlan who will work with Ted Jackson. He doesn't know about Alex is coming so he didn't look like pleased to Alex. Alex was mad on hid dad because he didn't told Eddie about Alex is coming with his dad. His dad try to ignore his madness. He and his dad were talking with Lao Xu about how where he lives , what his name means and etc... Alex real name was very difficult to pronounce so Lao Xu gave him new name Shan Da. Shan Da means tall mountain and Alex is very tall. Alex asked his dad can they to Great Wall of China and Forbidden city. His dad just said we will see. Eddie and his beer , he drank orange juice that was very sweet and He went to sleep. When he woke up he took the shower and put the clothes on and went up to the roof, saw down he thinks it was way different from Canada.

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    There was one of the top news correspondents, Eddie Nowlan who will work with Ted Jackson. He doesn't know about Alex coming so he didn't look pleased to Alex. Alex was mad at his dad because he hadn't told Eddie about Alex coming with his dad. His dad tried to ignore his anger. He and his dad were talking with Lao Xu about how where he lives , what his name means etc... Alex real name was very difficult to pronounce so Lao Xu gave him new name Shan Da. Shan Da means tall mountain and Alex is very tall. Alex asked his dad if they can go to Great Wall of China and Forbidden City. His dad just said we will see. Eddie had his beer , he drank orange juice that was very sweet and He went to sleep. When he woke up he took a shower and put his clothes on and went up to the roof, and looked down. He thinks it is very different from Canada.

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