Post a New Question

English

posted by .

Need help proofreading and editing this body paragraph
this is the last body paragraph for my essay, we are supposed to write about solutions other than building empires.


The Ultra-nationalism of building an empire is not the right way to preserve and expand a nation’s culture or to provide a secure source of natural resources. A way in which a nation can acquire a secure source of natural resources is through trade. One country can trade a specific good other country needs, with a good that they need. This trading practice will benefit you far greater than having a war to acquire resources; it will allow a nation to establish a trade network which will provide you with most or all of the natural resources you require. A nation cultures and religion can be preserved and even expanded by introducing new populations into your nation. If one country permits immigrants to come to their country they can teach these immigrants their culture and religion which will then promote some of them to practice this culture and even convert to the nation’s religion. This concludes that there are more peaceful methods to achieve a nation’s goal than to build empires.

Respond to this Question

First Name
School Subject
Your Answer

Similar Questions

  1. english

    HELP!! I wrote an outline instead of a body paragraph on "Healthful eating" which was wrong. Please, can someone write a good body paragraph for me, so that I have an idea of what I'm supposed to do. Thanks
  2. English 11 (Novel Study No country for old men)

    Im doing an essay on the lack of redemption shown in the novel No country for old men. I needs 1000-1200 words and i got about 7 paragraphs these include -Thesis -Body paragraph 1(the corruption of money) -Body paragraph 2(the curruption …
  3. English 11 (No country for Old men Novel Study)

    Im doing an essay on the lack of redemption shown in the novel No country for old men. I needs 1000-1200 words and i got about 7 paragraphs these include -Thesis -Body paragraph 1(the corruption of money) -Body paragraph 2(the curruption …
  4. English

    I need intro paragraph proofread and edited please source used for intro paragraph : empire demands discipline, the coordination of all forces and a deeply felt sense of duty and sacrifice: this fact explains many aspects of the practical …
  5. English

    i need the body paragraph below edited and proofread please, i am trying to prove that empires are wrong. Some people believe that the building of empire provides a secure natural resource due to taking over territories owned by other …
  6. English

    I need my intro and body paragraph proofread please,for the body paragraph i am supposed to talk about arguments made by the other side and trash it. Imperialism can benefit one’s country. Empires can be built by securing resources; …
  7. English

    i need this body paragraph edited please Various people believe that the building of an empire provides secure natural resources due to taking over territories owned by other countries. This ultra-nationalism can actually create a …
  8. English

    Imperialism can benefit one’s country. Empires can be built by securing resources; however, the building of empires has essentially led to many wars throughout history. Some believe that empires are needed and inevitable. These people …
  9. English

    this is an intro for an argumentative essay, the thesis for the essay is supposed to be that empires are bad..i need help in bringing that out better ( will be forever happy if it rewritten) empires are needed and inevitable. These …
  10. English Grammar

    need help with the editing of this paragraph. Various people believe that the building of an Empire provides secure natural resources from taking over territories claimed by other countries. This Ultra-Nationalism can actually begin …

More Similar Questions

Post a New Question