How do i write a thesis statement for analyze the Han and Roman attitudes towards technology? Or can i get one to use?
A thesis statement needs to include what YOU THINK about the topic. So ... what do you think about the Han and Roman attitudes? What technology was in use or being developed during those eras?
You can check here to see non-thesis statements turned into thesis statements:
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
well i started writing a thesis statement but im not sure if it is correct?
i wrote: During the classical period Han and Roman attitudes towards technology were self glorifying, however, the Han had a more unified and was more to the common people, where, Rome had an aristocracy and class distinctions.
"During the classical period Han and Roman attitudes towards technology were self glorifying, however, the Han had a more unified and was more to the common people, where, Rome had an aristocracy and class distinctions."
What classical period?
What do you mean by "self-glorifying" (there needs to be a hyphen in there)?
"had a more unified" what?
"was more" what "to the common people"?
What do class distinctions and aristocracy have to do with technology?
Make your sentence simpler. Look at the very last example in that website I linked above.