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Any ideas on how to make my thesis stronger or how to change it. My paper is going to be on jacksonian democracy principles, election of 1824, election of 1828, Peggy Eaton Affair, Indian Policy (Worcester vs. Georgia, Trail of tears, Nullification Crisis/Force Act), and the Bank War.
This is the thesis i have. The Jacksonian Era was known as the "The Common Man" and to live up to that, Jackson was willing to fight any challenge that he was faced with.

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    I presume you are referring to President Andrew Jackson -- but I shouldn't have to presume that! His name needs to be in your thesis statement somewhere.

    Revise and repost, and someone here will check this for you again.

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    Yes I'm talking about Andrew Jackson

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