posted by y912f .
ok. so my freewriting and outline is ready. now i just need to think of a good thesis statement.
can someone please give me some suggestions
you want something that's going to grab the readers attention. That the point of it. Think of a sentence that defines your topic and grabs my attention
How about --
The day my sister was born was a nerve-wracking, yet very happy time in my life.
ok ms.sue i'll use yours