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Color of Our Friendship

Friendship is full of colors.
Red is action.
It makes us feel active.
Yellow is happiness.
It makes us feel happy.
Gray is age.
It keeps us living harmonously together.
Friendship is full of colors.

(It is a poem I made. Would you check the poem and correct the errors, please?)

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    No errors there either! :)


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    Spelling -- "harmoniously" (missing "i")

    I like your poem -- very nice!!

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