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In society today, some families don't have essential needs of financial stability, attention of their parents, and a comfortable household to grow up in a stable environment which lead to a dangerous future ahead. Comparing to that and our own vision of a model of an American family, we feel incompetent.

Can someone help me out if this is an good thesis statement?

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