posted by leslie .
i need to write an essay about the differences and similarities of Romeo and Paris(romeo and juliet) please help with the introduction
What is your thesis sentence?
What have you said in the body of the paper?
Remember -- the introduction INTRODUCES your paper. You can't introduce something until you know what you're saying.
my thesis is "throughot the story 'romeo and juliet', romeo and paris are often compared"
the body talks about paris, romeo, and similarities
That's not a thesis statement. It's a statement of fact.
Read this to learn how to write a good thesis statement: