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Mis hermanos gemelos nacieron en el Hospital de Riverside en Columbus, Ohio. Uno tiene cabello negro y ojos azules. El otro es rubio con ojos verdes. Nacieron el veintinueve del año dos mil. Estaba sorprendida y confundida. Pedí ver a los bebés. Vi a los bebés y estaban muy lindos. Estaba esperando en el hospital y alguien me regaló una camisa que decía "Ahora soy la hermana grande." Estaba con mi familia y tenía seis años de edad.

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The sentence

<<Nacieron el veintinueve del año dos mil.>>
seems to have the month of the year missing

It seems like you have provided a paragraph in Spanish describing the birth of your twin brothers in Riverside Hospital in Columbus, Ohio. One twin has black hair and blue eyes, while the other twin is blond with green eyes. They were born on the twenty-ninth of the year two thousand. You were surprised and confused, but you asked to see the babies. You saw them, and they were very cute. At the time, you were six years old and were with your family. If you have any specific questions or if there's anything else you would like to know, please let me know!