You posted:

I`m not too sure how to put in a transition sentance from the intro to body paragraph. I thought I would just go into saying "when the hero falls in love with another person, he loses all sense of logic and probability, which in turn bring's forth his downfall"

I'd use this, yes, but I'd have it stop after "probability." Otherwise, you end up with more repetition.

Thank you sooooooo much :)

You're very welcome! Go get an A!!

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To create a smooth transition sentence from the introduction to the body paragraph, you can follow these steps:

1. Start by summarizing the main point or theme discussed in the introduction. In this case, it is about the hero's loss of logic and probability leading to their downfall.

2. Next, think about a specific aspect or example that supports this main point. It could be a particular event, decision, or situation in the hero's story that demonstrates this loss of rationality.

3. Use transitional words or phrases to connect the introduction with the upcoming body paragraph. Some examples of transitional words or phrases you could use are "For instance," "In particular," "As a result," or "To illustrate."

Applying these steps, you could create a transition sentence like this:

"When the hero falls in love with another person, he loses all sense of logic and probability. For instance, as his infatuation grows, he becomes blind to the consequences of his actions and makes impulsive decisions, ultimately leading to his downfall."

Using this approach helps you smoothly transition from the introductory paragraph to the main points you plan to discuss in the body paragraph.