To Lena - re English

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I`m not too sure how to put in a transition sentance from the intro to body paragraph. I thought I would just go into saying "when the hero falls in love with another person, he loses all sense of logic and probability, which in turn bring's forth his downfall"

I'd use this, yes, but I'd have it stop after "probability." Otherwise, you end up with more repetition.

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    Thank you sooooooo much :)

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    You're very welcome! Go get an A!!


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