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can you please correct my personifitcation poem? please? for any mistakes?? thank you!


The Wild River


The river breaths heavily
It is fast and mean
The river is strong
And swallows all the leaves.



The river is a stealer
As it snatches the pebbles
Then gobbles them up
In their stomach, deeper, & deeper.

  • language -

    isn't it supposed to be "breathes"?

  • language -

    The last line should be "in its stomach" Only one river, so their would not be correct.

  • language -

    The last line could stand if you mean the river is in their stomach = referring to the preceding "they."

    Sra

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