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The best way to increase sales and satisfy customers complaints, the menu should be updated with new food items and more choices.

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    You should change it to this: The menu should be updated with new food items and more choices, since that is the best way to increase sales and satisfy customer complaints.

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    Here is another alternative.

    For the best way to increase sales and satisfy customers complaints, the menu should be updated with new food items and more choices.

    I hope this helps a little more. Thanks for asking.

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