How should I write the following sentence? (Choose the correct word in the parenthesis): Also, do you think the rest of the sentence is put together properly and makes sense. If not, can you help me fix it?

1. Joseph Paul DiMaggio was born (on/in) November 25, 1914 (in/on) Martinez, California.

Thank You so much!

If you say "in November" you mean sometime during the entire month.

If you say "on November ___" you mean a specific day.

If you say "in Martinez, California" you mean somewhere in the town.

If you say "on Martinez, California" you mean somewhere on (over?) the town -- which doesn't make sense!

You also need a comma after 1914.

To write the sentence correctly, you should use the word "on" in the first blank and "in" in the second blank.

Sentence: Joseph Paul DiMaggio was born on November 25, 1914 in Martinez, California.

As for the rest of the sentence, it is structured properly and makes sense. It provides information about Joseph Paul DiMaggio's birth date and place of birth.