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Broken Heart

Pieces torn apart
My heart is empty
Nothing of compassion, or joy
Just the pieces that were many
Joined together to form
As one as all
Are now just two halfs
They are very small
Love, and careness
Was what we shared
Now there is nothing
Nothing but air
Air between us
That wasn't meant to be
I guess our love was just a dream

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