In the famous play, Julius Caesar, the most important characters would have to be Caesar and Brutus. Each character has its distinctive role, Caesar as the ruler of Rome and Brutus as one of the Caesar¡¯s best friends. They both have the same goal, but different ambitions. Although they are respected and eager to make Rome a better place, their inflexibility becomes a major flaw, meeting a tragic end.

First of all, Caesar was inflexible throughout the play almost the entire time. Caesar¡¯s most foolish decision was not listening to some else¡¯s advice or concern. Caesar was warned by so many people about his coming death. These people were the Soothsayer, his wife Calpurnia and Artemidorus. They told Caesar about their dreams, bad signs and warning such as ¡®Beware the Ides of March¡¯ however, Caesar did not listen to them or even accept to listen. He thought that he was too powerful and worthy that he did not listen to advice and just make his own decision. His rigidity blocked his way to avoid death and his enemies seized opportunity to kill him. His reward of being the most powerful man in Rome vanished with his one fatal mistake of not listening to some else.
Brutus also showed his rigidity and met death however; he was honored by people around him. He was more unfortunate rather than being inflexible as he was tricked by Cassius and the other conspirators. He received a letter from Cassius disguised as a Roman complaining and worrying about Caesar being a dictator. Of course, Brutus made his mind to join the conspirators and kill Caesar for Rome. After being successful of killing Caesar, he made another mistake by allowing Antony to speak during the funeral oration. This gave Antony an opportunity to convince people that Caesar should not have been killed and Brutus and other conspirators should be blamed for his death. Throughout the play, Brutus showed his foolishness of making a bad decision. His reward of killing Caesar also vanished as Octavius came into the ruling position who acted the exactly the same way as the former ruler. Moreover, he blew his opportunity to convince the citizens of Rome by giving Antony an opportunity to speak after him.
Although both characters showed their inflexible actions and decisions, they also had successful times in the play. Caesar for instance, refused to receive the crown in front of Roman citizens three times, showing that he had no ambition of becoming a King, but to remain as a leader to guide Rome. Brutus also showed his noble behavior such as allowing Antony to speak during the funeral oration and accepting his failure and mistakes. These good deeds however, were useless as the consequences of these actions were bigger than the actions they made. It was a good intention, but the result for it was too big, also a negative one.
The Two main characters have shown their rigid actions throughout the play. Their decisions were made for the best intention but the results they brought them were the worst situation. The end they each met was very tragic but they both had its reason for it. Caesar and Brutus¡¯ inflexible decisions give a message to think twice, before it becomes a fatal mistake.

In the famous play Julius Caesar, both Caesar and Brutus play crucial roles as the most important characters. Caesar is depicted as the ruler of Rome, while Brutus is portrayed as one of Caesar's closest friends. Despite sharing a common goal of wanting to make Rome a better place, they possess different ambitions. However, their inflexibility becomes their major flaw, ultimately leading to their tragic ends.

Caesar demonstrates his inflexibility throughout the play, refusing to heed the advice and concerns of others. Despite multiple warnings about his impending death from individuals such as the Soothsayer, his wife Calpurnia, and Artemidorus, Caesar dismisses their counsel and chooses to make his own decisions. He believes that his power and superiority render him impervious to harm or danger. Unfortunately, his rigid mindset prevents him from avoiding his fate, allowing his enemies to capitalize on the opportunity to assassinate him. Thus, his former position as the most powerful man in Rome is shattered by his fatal mistake of disregarding the advice of others.

Similarly, Brutus also displays inflexibility and ultimately meets his demise, although he is honored by those around him. He falls victim to Cassius and the other conspirators who manipulate him with a letter, disguised as a Roman concerned about Caesar's potential dictatorship. Convinced of the righteousness of his cause, Brutus joins the conspiracy and plays a significant role in Caesar's assassination for the sake of Rome. However, he commits another grave blunder by allowing Antony to speak at Caesar's funeral. This unwittingly creates an opportunity for Antony to sway public opinion against the conspirators and incite anger towards them. Throughout the play, Brutus exposes his own folly in making ill-advised decisions. The reward he sought in killing Caesar dissipates when Octavius assumes power and exhibits the same despotic tendencies. Moreover, Brutus squanders his chance to sway the citizens of Rome in his favor by giving Antony the platform to speak after him.

While both characters demonstrate their inflexible actions and decisions, they also experience moments of success within the play. Caesar, for instance, staunchly rejects the crown on three separate occasions, underscoring his lack of ambition to become a king and his desire to remain a leader guiding Rome. Brutus, too, exhibits noble behavior in allowing Antony to speak during the funeral and accepting the consequences of his failures and mistakes. However, these acts of goodwill prove inconsequential as the resulting consequences far outweigh their initial intentions, leading to negative outcomes.

The two main characters exemplify rigidity throughout the play. Although their decisions were made with good intentions, the consequences that followed far surpassed their initial intentions, leading to tragic results. Their stories serve as a cautionary message, encouraging individuals to carefully consider their actions before they become fatal mistakes.

In the famous play, Julius Caesar, the most important characters would have to be Caesar and Brutus. Each character has its distinctive role, Caesar as the ruler of Rome and Brutus as one of the Caesar’s best friends. They both have the same goal, but different ambitions. Although they are respected and eager to make Rome a better place, their inflexibility becomes a major flaw, meeting a tragic end.

First of all, Caesar was inflexible throughout the play almost the entire time. Caesar’s most foolish decision was not listening to some else’s advice or concern. Caesar was warned by so many people about his coming death. These people were the Soothsayer, his wife Calpurnia and Artemidorus. They told Caesar about their dreams, bad signs and warning such as “Beware the Ides of March” however, Caesar did not listen to them or even accept to listen. He thought that he was too powerful and worthy that he did not listen to advice and just make his own decision. His rigidity blocked his way to avoid death and his enemies seized opportunity to kill him. His reward of being the most powerful man in Rome vanished with his one fatal mistake of not listening to some else.

Brutus also showed his rigidity and met death however; he was honored by people around him. He was more unfortunate rather than being inflexible as he was tricked by Cassius and the other conspirators. He received a letter from Cassius disguised as a Roman complaining and worrying about Caesar being a dictator. Of course, Brutus made his mind to join the conspirators and kill Caesar for Rome. After being successful of killing Caesar, he made another mistake by allowing Antony to speak during the funeral oration. This gave Antony an opportunity to convince people that Caesar should not have been killed and Brutus and other conspirators should be blamed for his death. Throughout the play, Brutus showed his foolishness of making a bad decision. His reward of killing Caesar also vanished as Octavius came into the ruling position who acted the exactly the same way as the former ruler. Moreover, he blew his opportunity to convince the citizens of Rome by giving Antony an opportunity to speak after him.

Although both characters showed their inflexible actions and decisions, they also had successful times in the play. Caesar for instance, refused to receive the crown in front of Roman citizens three times, showing that he had no ambition of becoming a King, but to remain as a leader to guide Rome. Brutus also showed his noble behavior such as allowing Antony to speak during the funeral oration and accepting his failure and mistakes. These good deeds however, were useless as the consequences of these actions were bigger than the actions they made. It was a good intention, but the result for it was too big, also a negative one.

The Two main characters have shown their rigid actions throughout the play. Their decisions were made for the best intention but the results they brought them were the worst situation. The end they each met was very tragic but they both had its reason for it. Caesar’s and Brutus’s inflexible decisions give a message to think twice, before it becomes a fatal mistake.

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In the last sentence of para 1, you are saying that their inflexibility meets a tragic end. Is that what you mean??

"listening to some else’s" = ??

"warned by so many people about his coming death." When you use "so" or "such" in a sentence, you need a clause beginning with "that" to complete the thought. He was warned by so many people that ... ??

The word "however" is not a conjunction. It's a conjunctive adverb. How will you fix the run-on at that point?
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm

"or even accept to listen" -- You need a different word to replace "accept" which is not used correctly in this sentence.

OK, now -- read all of your paper aloud to someone -- or ask someone to read it aloud to you. You will hear the errors. Wherever the reader stumbles and has to re-read the sentence or clause, that's where there's an error of some type that needs fixing.