Hopefully I got and made all of the changes.

En las vacaciones de invierno me quedé en casa. Pasé tiempo con mi familia. Yo estudié para mis exámenes finales
y trabajé en mi crédito-extra. Tuve tiempo para organizar mi cuarto y mi ropa. Yo celebré Chanukah con mi madre y la Navidad con mi padre. En Chanukah nosotros celebramos por ocho días. Cada noche encendimos las velas y recibimos unos regalos. . La Navidad nosotros decoramos un árbol y celebramos por un día. Yo recibí una cartera amarilla, perfume y una alarma para mi IPOD. Mi mamá y yo nos divertimos al ir de compras. Pasé tiempo también con mis amigos.

During the winter break I stayed at home. I spent time with my family. I studied for my final exams and worked on my extra credit. I had time to organize my room and clothes. I celebrated Chanukah with my mom and Christmas with my dad. On Chanukah we celebrated for eight days. We lit the candles each night and received gifts. For Christmas we decorated a tree and celebrated for one day. I received a yellow wallet, perfume and an alarm clock for my IPOD. My mom and I had fun together shopping. I also spent time with my friends

Great! Perfect! Leave it alone!

Sra