posted by Tom from Mississippi .
I have been working on a paper for a week, the first day we found out. and It is due tommorrow. I have check and rewritten entire paragraphs because I didn't think that they made sense. I have worked countless hours and finnaly handed it into my teacher for a final revision before it is due tommorrow. She crossed out numerous paragraph and in one instanse put a HUGE NO!!! through a paragraph with no explanation. When she handed it back she rolled her eyes and told me i needed to work on the focus of my paper. Any tips on how to focus better?
what is the paper on? and is what kinda of essay is it?
A paper explaining the Satire of Religion in Huckleberry Finn.
Without seeing what you already have that she doesn't like, it's impossible to help.
Post what you have, and let us know what comments she made.
well i could tell you if you told me what type of essay it is ?
like if it is an argumentative essay, you need to start of with a topic sentence right ? and then put your arguments in order from most least important to most important .
I'm sorry thank you for the help any way but its a 7 page paper and its almost compleatly marked in red pen. I must get off the computer now because of lightning sorry but thank you anyway