french

posted by .

Can someone proofread this please? I'm terrible at proofreading french -_-

Pretty much it's like this i need to get 5 interesting places or facts and write 5 sentences about them. Right now i only have 2 sentences and will post more later so here it is


Visiter au Québec et Voir Montréal, la plus grand city au Québec. C'est le dixieme nettoyons city dans le monde. le city-soeur de Montréal est Hiroshima, Japan. Montréal est la siège du "Just for Laughs". Découvrez ca le Montréal est en fait une île.




La Ville de Québec ou 95% du les peuples parlent le francais comme leur langue maternelle. C'est la siège à le carnival d'hiver. C'est aussi le suelment city fortifié nord du le mexique. La ville de Québec est la siège à beaucoup des musée d'art, des églises, et culturel richesses

  • french -

    Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Forum. Always try to write using the structures and vocabulary you have used. Sometimes, if you do NOT provide the English of what you are attempting to say, we can't guess!

    Having lived in Montréal, I'm so glad you are writing about that wonderful city!

    The first sentence is not a complete sentence since you begin with infinitives (to visit Quebec, etc.) "city" is "la ville" = la ville la plus grande.....

    Is sentence #2 saying "It's the 10th cleanest city in the world? C'est la dixième ville la plus propre du monde.

    If you are using English, use quotes "Sister City"...

    Do you mean the "headquarters" for Just For Laughs? In French, that series is called "Juste Pour Rire."

    I'm not sure what you wish to say for the next sentence = Découvrez que Montréal est une île en fait.

    Let me come back for the 2nd part, as my eyes get weary scrolling up and down!

    Sra (aka Mme)

  • french -

    Partie II:

    The first sentence means "where?" = où. There IS a difference between "peuples" and "gens" so here "les gens" would be better. Don't forget all accents = le français. C'est le site (site?) du Carnival d'hiver.

    Word order in the 3rd sentence = C'est aussi la seule ville fortifiée au nord du Mexique.

    For variety's sake, you might want to change the last sentence a bit. = Dans la ville de Québec vous pouvez trouver beaucoup de musées d'art, des églises, et des richesses culturelles.

    Sra (aka Mme)

  • french -

    thanks and sorry for not saying things in english :( this is my first time using it i'll make sure to type what i'm trying to say in english next time

  • french -

    ugh, all the accents are screwed up...

    here's the fixed version
    i hope it works >.<




    Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Forum. Always try to write using the structures and vocabulary you have used. Sometimes, if you do NOT provide the English of what you are attempting to say, we can't guess!

    Having lived in Montréal, I'm so glad you are writing about that wonderful city!

    The first sentence is not a complete sentence since you begin with infinitives (to visit Quebec, etc.) "city" is "la ville" = la ville la plus grande.....

    Is sentence #2 saying "It's the 10th cleanest city in the world? C'est la dixième ville la plus propre du monde.

    If you are using English, use quotes "Sister City"...

    Do you mean the "headquarters" for Just For Laughs? In French, that series is called "Juste Pour Rire."

    I'm not sure what you wish to say for the next sentence = Découvrez que Montréal est une île en fait.

    Let me come back for the 2nd part, as my eyes get weary scrolling up and down!

    The first sentence means "where?" = où. There IS a difference between "peuples" and "gens" so here "les gens" would be better. Don't forget all accents = le français. C'est le site (site?) du Carnival d'hiver.

    Word order in the 3rd sentence = C'est aussi la seule ville fortifié au nord du Mexique.

    For variety's sake, you might want to change the last sentence a bit. = Dans la ville de Québec vous pouvez trouver beaucoup de musées d'art, des églises, et des richesses culturelles.

Respond to this Question

First Name
School Subject
Your Answer

Similar Questions

  1. French help ASAP!

    I need information about d'Arsene Lupin.I have to do a report about it and I have no clue what I'm doing. Does anyone know of an english site with onfo abouit this I don't really want to read french. I put your topic into www.google.com …
  2. vocab urgent

    i need 3 more sentences using circuitous please help i really need it! Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Board but we do not DO the work for you! Use any good dictionary for the definition. Use any good Thesaurus for a synonym …
  3. French

    Our French class was given an assignment where each student would write a letter in French to a child in the 5th grade. I have looked up letter writing in French but I can only find ways to write formal letters. How would I begin the …
  4. French(needs a site)

    I'm doing a french presentation, and I would like to add some fun/funny facts about the french but I can't seem to find a good site. Please help!
  5. French (URGENT)

    Okay, for an assignment, I have to interview my partner in French. So I wrote down the questions I would ask him in English, but I don't know enough French to translate them. Can someone please help me translate these sentences into …
  6. English

    Thank you very much. Could you please check these sentences, too?
  7. English

    I urgently need you to revise these sentences (instructions), please. 1)Explain to a friend of yours who has never flown what he/she should do before boarding a plane. 2) Talk about the place where you live using the following grid: …
  8. French

    How do I talk about fear in french? The activity is to introduce ourselves (what we like, don't like, find interesting, want to do in life) and then it says: "si vous avez peur de quelque chose." My understanding is that it is asking
  9. french

    i want to learn this language. Please write some french sentences and also translate them into english. Please earlier, its very urgent.
  10. French

    Write a paragraph in French of at least 10 sentences talking about a trip you hope to take in the future. What do you hope to do?

More Similar Questions