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Can someone check this for me? I wrote it a while ago and it's due soon. There were certain vocab words that had to be in it and I couldn't find a way to stick some of them in there so can someone help me find ways to incorporate them? They are depuis, pendant, lire, ecrire, choisir, echapper a, and parascolaire(extracurricular? No clue how to put that one in there!)

Le Président français Nicolas Sarkozy a menacé attaquer un groupe de presse sauf si la compagnie supprime une poupée vaudou de Sarkozy et un manuel au sujet du vaudou. Une poupée vaudou est une poupée représentant l'esprit d'une personne. Quelquefois, elle est employée pour lui « jeter des sorts » et elle est souvent représenté dans la culture populaire. Sur la poupée il y a des citations de Sarkozy.

Also, what would be the best way to say that the judge allowed the dolls to remain in stores because taking them out would violate the right to humor? I don't know how that would be said the way a French person would say it. Thank you so much in advance!

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    A comma setting off the name = Le Président français, Nicolas Sarkozy, a menacé, etc.

    In the 2nd sentence, you might say "est une poupée qui représente, etc.

    Check the adjective in sentence 3 = elle est souvent représentée

    Le juge a permis que les poupées restent dans les magasins parce qu'il les enlève cela (ça) violerait le droit de l'humour.

    des idées = Depuis une semaine, il écrit une annonce que tout le monde lit. Après, il a échappé à la campagne où sa femme a choisi enseigner une classe parascolaire.

    En réalité n'importe comment utiliser les mots, n'est-ce pas? :)

    Sra (aka Mme)

  • French -

    Thank you so much! Entirely out of curiosity, how many languages do you speak?

  • French -

    As I used to tell my students: "I have studied 19 languages, but I only speak one at a time!"

    Sra (aka Mme)

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