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I'm trying to write a company bio. I just want to know what you think and see if it needs improvement.


1. Who are you (literally)
2. What do you do? What is your area of expertise?
3. Who does this help? What needs do you fulfill for others?


1. Who are you?
(Name of company), freelance web developing company

2. What do you do? What is your area of expertise?
Design/develop websites using flash, css, xhtml, javascrpt, etc..

3. Who does this help? What needs do you fulfill for others?
We develop websites for any need be it personal or business to the satisfaction of our clients


(Name of company) is a freelance web developing company that specializes in designing websites using flash, css, xhtml, javascript, php, etc. We develop websites for any need be it personal or business to the satisfaction of our clients. Our company has the upmost desire to be the very best web design company to date.

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    The bio is pretty incomplete in my opinion.

    First, under 2) are there any significant projects the company has accomplished, like examples?
    Lastly, companies are non living entities, they actually don't do anything. Folks in the company do things. Under who does this I would include short bios of the principal management and creative staff, and what they do.

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