# journalis

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ok so i have asked help already on this same article but i need help making this paragraph better and more understanding.

Soccer is a simplier game. The goal of the game is for the players to kick the ball into there teams net and there are more plays involved. In football there are more perplexing plays involved. The football players most catch the ball and get it to the end zone with out getting tackled.

ok should i compare soccer to yet another sport or is that one ok?

does it make you want to read more?

what things could make it better??

does it even make sense

• journalis -

Here is a really good site for basic soccer.

http://www.soyouwanna.com/site/syws/soccer/soccerfull.html

You might start the story with something of interest to students. For instance:
If you have seen the movie, Bend it like Beckham, then you know something about soccer. But do you know the positions, what their jobs are, what skills are needed? Then build your article on those topics. At the end you might say something about the fact that Beckham is working in the US to make soccer the popular sport it is in England.

• journalis -

thx that helped me a lot

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