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ok i read a book called WE BEAT THE STREETS AND MY TEACHER WANTS ME TO DO A 5 PARGRAPH ON THIS QUESTION. wHAT ROLE DO GOALS AND DREAMS PLAY IN OUR LIVES? BUT THE QUESTION IT HAS TO BE A PERSONAL EXPERINCE BUT THE THING IS I AM RELLY CONFUSED NEED HELP IMMDATILEY DUE TOMMOEWW THANK U FOR WHO EVER HELPS ME

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    Shaniqua, when you post on this board, please don't use all capital letters. It's considered impolite and is like shouting.

    Your teacher wants you to write about your goals and dreams.

    What are they? How do they affect you? What have they helped you accomplish? What more do you want to accomplish?

    If you write your essay here, we'll be glad to help you.

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    oh i am so so sorry i didn't mean too so do you want me to answer those questions to you right now

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    goals is what is what you must achieve dreams are something you want to do before your you want to do that goal the roll this has in life is it helps you to achieve your goals in life

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    OK. :-) Thanks for removing your caps.

    Yes, please answer those questions in paragraph form.

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    [first pargharh] Well on of my Goal is to succeedd in math. I also would like to get accepted into college. Also try to keep my grades up in all my classes and do all my Classes and do all my work as possible. However i will try to meet friends that will be successful and go to college as well. I choose this goal because that's the most things i am seriously worried about.[Second pargraph] These goals affect me because its something i wont to achevie. Also because its somethings i need to inprove in . However this affects me also because its something my mother relly wont's me to inprove in doing . \need help on rest \

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    That's a good start. :-)

    What are you doing to make sure you get good grades?

    You could go on and talk about why you want to please your mother.

    What dreams do you have for your adult life?

    Before you post more of your essay, please proof read it carefully.

    This spell check site will help.

    http://www.spellcheck.net/

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    ok thank u i am working on it know

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    How does whatever goal or dreams you have in your life affect the way you live? what does this mean

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    What are they? How do they affect you? What have they helped you accomplish? What more do you want to accomplish?


    Paragraph one:
    Define what a goal and a dream is to you...personally. This is the intro paragraph....well to me a goal means is an accomplishment that I have to achieve that I wonted to achieve a long time . However a dream to me means something I want to do before I want to do that goal the roll this has in life is it helps me to achieve my goals in life .

    Paragraph two:
    What role do they play?The role they play in my life the goal plays the main part because.This is something i am trying to achieve now in my life. when in fact i know i am going to achieve that goal in three more years.I say that because i have friends that stick with me sometimes and then i have friends that are allways there for me .But i do have friends who i am going to graudute with me and we even planned on trying to go to the same colleg as one another. How does whatever goal or dreams you have in your life affect the way you live? How do they affect the decisions you make? The answer to that question will basically tell you the role, which will answer the question for you

    Paragraph three:
    Tell about your personal experience

    Paragraph four:
    This one should tell how that expereince has affected you life this far. How has it shaped who you are or what you do? How has it shaped what you want to do

    Paragraph five:
    Just REsummarize all that you said...This is the "wrapping it up paragraph"


    ok this is what my sister helped me to do the pargraphs but i am having a hard time answering them a little

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    Your sister is absolutely right.

    Only you can answer these questions.

    You have a good start. Now, just buckle down and finish this essay.

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    ok i sure will i relly thank you and appreciate you u relly helped me ok know i going to go finish know

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    ok

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    ok i need help on more time then i will be ok what does the personal experince is saying wrie about what personal experience

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    A personal experience is something that happened to you. Did you ever give up a time to "play" so that you could study and do homework? How did it make you feel?

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    ok i understand i was wondering why the lines was like that ms.sue

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    or maybe not

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    maybe need more help

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    If you need more help, please start a new thread.

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    WHAT THAT MEAN

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    Oh never mine is it post new ouestion thanks anyway

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    How does whatever goal or dreams you have in your life affect the way you live? what does this mean

    It means to decide how your goals and dreams have changed you or made a difference in your life. You said your goal is to get good grades in school and go to college. Getting good grades means studying a lot and working hard. Most students would rather be hanging out with friends or playing on the computer or watching TV than studying. Studying cuts into "fun" time. When you pursue your goals and spend time at home studying, you're giving up "play" time.

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