English

posted by .

On the various types of patterns of development, choose a pattern to plan, organize, and write an essay. I have chosen Youth Violence as a cause and effect for my pattern development. In writing your essay, base your writing on your own experiences and general knowledge about the topic; do not research this essay or include any citations. Use the writing process listed in the coordinating to draft and finalize essay.

Need help to finish up to a length of 400 words and if it's going in the right direction.

How can I send you what I've already written up?

  • English -

    You can copy it from a Word document and paste it here.

    Or -- you can type it here.

  • English -

    When choosing a pattern to plan, organize, and write your essay, I have recommended
    the cause and the effect pattern of development as a model. As I brainstorm ideas and base my
    writing experience and general knowledge about the topic of youth violence, a combination of
    individual, relational, community, and societal factors is contribute to the risk of perpetrating
    IPV (Intimate Partner Violence).

    First of all, I would talk about how youth violence often seems to be the direct or linking
    results or direct effects of a number of societal problems. For example, I feel like youth
    violence often originates from unstable family structures, poor education or dropout rates, single
    parent homes, lower socioeconomic status, increases and exposure to prolonged violence from
    movies, music, and violent video games, and a number of other issues. I also think that divorced
    homes, peer pressure, increased exposure to weapons, abuse in the home or family domestic
    violence, substance abuse, sexual harassment, relationship abuse, unemployment and other
    reasons contributing to the problem. As you explore these causes, I might use these aforesaid
    examples as starters.

    Next, after looking at various causes for youth violence, I definitely want to explore and
    state some of the effects. Some of the ramifications that I personally think are related to and
    linked to youth violence that includes higher homicide rates in America. The higher prison rates,
    lower literacy rates, prison overcrowding conditions, gang violence and youth deaths has lower
    increased teen pregnancies, increased suicides, etc. Other effect that causes youth violence in the
    world is low self-esteem, low academic achievement, involvement in aggressive or delinquent
    behavior as a youth and physical violence. Physical violence includes a partner history of
    alcohol or drug abuse; assault of any kind, ranging from pinching or pushing to choking,
    shooting, stabbing, and murder. The verbal, emotional, mental, or psychological abuse is
    described as using words to criticize, demean, or otherwise decrease the confidence of the
    victim.

    As part of treating domestic violence it involves keeping the victim safe and developing
    a safety plan for home and the workplace.

  • English -

    Is this the beginning of your essay? It doesn't make any sense to me.

    I think your teacher wants you to write a paper about the cause and effect pattern of youth violence. Or did you change your topic to IPV?

  • English -

    It is overall. Maybe I will need to take out the part that talks about IPV. What do you think?

  • English -

    Let's start over. Forget about patterns, etc.

    Write about what you know about youth violence.

Respond to this Question

First Name
School Subject
Your Answer

Similar Questions

  1. english

    what does structure mean when writing an essay on ballads If you mean structure of the essay, that refers to how you organize your paragraphs within your paper. Are you following a comparison/contrast pattern?
  2. AED

    i Outlines what a teacher perceives as average skills for a child within the chosen developmental stage · Provides examples of assignments or activities the student would assign to improve reading and writing skills based on what …
  3. English-Essay Writing

    If someone could check this for me please. I'm writing an essay on To Kill a Mockingbird and have to have 3 conjunctives that follow the pattern-semi colon, conjunctive adverb, comma. I'm hoping I don't have to write the whole sentence …
  4. essay writing

    What is the number 1 essay writing rule? A.Edit and revise your essay. B.Always write five paragraphs. C.Always brainstorm before writing the essay. D.Start writing the essay the day it is assigned. .I CHOSE C.
  5. child development am i on right track

    2. Assignment: Reading and Writing Development • Compose a 1,050- to 1,400-word paper addressing the following points: o Choose two age groups from different periods in the physical development process. Give some thought to the age …
  6. Written Communication

    Can someone help me Pleaseeeee….on a writing assignment?
  7. help please:)

    What is the number one eassy writing rule?
  8. writing essay

    What is the number one essay writing rule?
  9. Child Development

    • Choose two age groups from different periods in the physical development process. Give some thought to the age groups you choose, as you will focus on them in later weeks and for the final project. • Compare what you would expect …
  10. critical thinking

    A _______ is what you would write after you read an essay, analyze it, and write about some aspect of it. A. response paper B. classification essay C. pattern of development D. study guide my answer is a.

More Similar Questions