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I have to write an essay for class. The topic is: Is too much emphasis placed on grades in our system? Explain.

Is this a strong or weak thesis? Our educational system is to mandated when it comes to grades.

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    Your sentence doesn't make sense. The word "mandated" is not used correctly (and the word before it should be "too" not "to").

    Find another word for "mandated" and repost please.

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    Our educational system is too strict when it comes to grades.

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    How about --

    Too much importance is attached to grades in our educational system.

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